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GRE英語考試作文點(diǎn)評(píng)：滿分作文的解析
Issue 23
"Scholars and researchers should not be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society. It is more important that they pursue their individual interests, however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem."
這個(gè)題目分析起來是說學(xué)術(shù)目的的。作為一個(gè)scholar/researcher應(yīng)該考慮的是自己的感興趣的領(lǐng)域所在而不是考慮是不是他們的研究成果是對(duì)整個(gè)大社會(huì)大環(huán)境有貢獻(xiàn)的。這個(gè)題目第一眼看起來好象似乎是有理的，但是想到很多時(shí)候很多科學(xué)家的成果實(shí)際是無意義的。美國(guó)不是有一個(gè)搞笑諾貝爾獎(jiǎng)嗎？就是獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)類似的研究的。雖然也是科學(xué)成果但是根本就沒有實(shí)際操作的價(jià)值或者對(duì)人類或者對(duì)社會(huì)根本就沒有意義的。
但是這個(gè)contribution在某些時(shí)候也可以引申到名利方面。從這個(gè)方面來講，這個(gè)題目是可以成立的。
對(duì)這個(gè)題目進(jìn)行進(jìn)一步的分析，可以看出來題目里面有一個(gè)比較，非常明顯的比較，more來帶出來的，所以我們可以說這個(gè)speaker的觀點(diǎn)是很明顯的表明了自己是支持哪個(gè)方面的。
Should academic scholars and researchers be free to pursue whatever avenues of inquiry and research that interest them, no matter how unusual or idiosyncratic, as the speaker asserts? Or should they strive instead to focus on those areas that are most likely to benefit society?
拿問句來起頭，來質(zhì)疑。脫離出了一般的解釋題目的開頭。雖然不是特別特別，但是還是讓人感覺比較的attractive。l strongly agree with the speaker, for three reasons.非常直白的陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)，同意speaker的觀點(diǎn)。
First of all,典型的連接詞，開始陳述觀點(diǎn)了。who is to decide which areas of academic inquiry are worth while?又是一個(gè)問句，但是這個(gè)問句的作用和開篇的問句不同了，是引出來自己論證的第一個(gè)方面。Scholars cannot be left to decide.自問自答。
Given a choice they will pursue their own idiosyncratic areas of interest, and it is highly unlikely that all scholars could reach a fully informed consensus as to what research areas would be most worthwhile. Nor can these decisions be left to regulators and legislators, who would bring to bear their own quirky notions about what would be worthwhile, and whose susceptibility to influence renders them untrustworthy in any event.
兩個(gè)否定句非常干凈利索的說出作者的看法，沒人有能力來決定什么是應(yīng)該worth researching的。
Secondly, by human nature we are motivated to pursue those activities in which w
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